Heyz this poem is gr8 i love it itz really sad and it showz wot a lot of people are going thru aswell keep it up!

That is a fantasic piece full of emotion, which i feel i understand, just know that things do get better and there are always people out there to help. Great piece xox lithium

This was sad and powerful and i think the flow was great throughout. You did a god job with the emotions in this.
God bless
Love Tara-Kay
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Wow, well this is definitely a very strong subject. But you did a really good job presenting it. I liked how you were trying to explained why you did it and gave some background to the story. Very well written. keep up the good work I gave it a 5/5. (please dont forget to return the favor I asked for on the discussion board, thanks!)
Rachel

Excellent!

i love your starting lines it catches the readers attention well, so much for the entire piece it conveyed a powerful message all about about suffering and mistakes, and for me that very emotional! the lines were great and simple words expresses alot!

keep it up!

Amazing
your word choice, the flawless flow, the perfect vocab, this was amazing, i am almost speechless, the emotions were dark , and so powerful, and the imagery is clear, so is the message you have talent and I belive this one of the best poems I have ever read 5.5

Wow.. that honestly sounds like something I would say while leaving this world.. Very touching and spoken so well.. I know how it is to feel like no one really see's what pain you're in underneath the smiles and giggles. (what...are we suppose to wear the frown and tears all the time??...You know?) Great work hun..5/5

Hey sweety...A very heartfelt poem, so full of raw emotion of pain, depression, loss and the feeling of giving up, when there is nothing left to do....Been there and done that, so it was easy for me to relate.... I just hope you feel better and hun, your poem is amazing, real talent here =0)

Love Sabrina

Very well written and beautiful. Full of emotions that reflect the inner ability of a true poet. Superb I would say and 100% poetic. 100/100 all the way

tc
Fsams

Amazing. There is nothing I would change about this poem. The flow absolutely flawless, one of the easiest poems I've read. The emotion evident, and the rhyming and vocab simple, yet effective. I like the storyline, although not that original, you did such a good job at writing it, that passed my mind. Excellent job.
5/5 no doubt.

Tammie

A great write. The topic isn't too original, but phrasing it in the form of a letter is [to me.] Anyways, the flow isn't forced, and the simpleness of the poem itself works in your favor.

Idk if i've commented this poem already but its rrly good. rrly rrly good. <333

Ok this kind poemand content is such a cliche but the truth is, this poem still managed to touch my heart i can feel the true pain and burden that you're going through (and i'm pretty sure like me there are other readers and poet who can relate on the emotions revealed in this)... great simple powerful piece.. keep it up!!

=O I'm so lucky I was scattering around the boards lol where I found you. Amazing poem the rhyming was really good and it send out a very strong message. I used to cut -.- and I used to think the blade was there for me through thick and thin...but it's not really It's just your mind making you believe that it is...I was foolish enough not to realize that -.- Amazing poem keep it up ^^ xxxx Much love from Roxy ^^

Wow! this poem is excellent! it portrays a heart felt story of pain and anguish, it puts lifes problems into perspective.

The rhyming structure throughout was flawless although in some parts the flow lost me a little.

still worthy of a 5/5 though.

wicked!

Gary.

This poem is the best one i've EVER READ!!! it's very touching and full of emotion!!! omg it's amazing keep up the great job!
100/5

Take care