Brilliant! So much mixed emotion, made it fun to read and kept me interested even though I don't like long poems too much, It just was super. Even though it didn't ryhme it flowed perfecto! Amazing really. Imagery and wording were amazing.
I loved this sentence:
Let us make his living hell a hell without living.

Keep it up! 5/5

I love this line "Let this curse in my eyes be the light."
it seems like a paradox. and i love poems like that. the poems that make you think and feel the emotion of the writer. it was a very passionate poem & it kept me interested. even though it didn't rhyme, there was still a fluidity to it. awesome! =)