Unknown Lost

by The Sky is Falling   Oct 2, 2007


Watch me run away with the pain
I have nothing at all to gain
Watch me slowly lose my self control
My life starting to unfold

Anger and hate cloud my eyes
Seeing you with him ruins my strong demise
Memories fog my weak mind
I can't do anything, of any kind

Go home and do nothing but sit on the floor
Mumble to self, get up, turn the key and lock the door
Write a letter stating why it's come to be
People always wondered what was wrong with me

Find some rope, make a noose
Remeber not to make it loose
Take a bottle of pills just in case
Stumble slightly, knock over a vase

Stand in front of a mirror. the demons I will soon face
Noose tight, pulls taken, leaving an awful taste
Close my eyes, take the small leap
Everyone will know of my defeat.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Guess what...I almost cried!!! This is truly sad...Despair, sorrow, jelousy...I felt everything. Life is still wonderful...just keep your faith in God. Believe me..sooner, everything's gonna be fine!!! You are talented!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 8 years ago

    by AGirlWorthFightingFor

    Minus some spelling errors, I think you have quite a lot of control of how you know what to write and what you want to say

  • 8 years ago

    by mckenzie

    Somehow I don't feel alone anymore. I think Its fine the way it is. Won't change a thing.

  • 9 years ago

    by andhereIstand

    "Find some rope, make a noose
    Remeber not to make it loose
    Take a bottle of pills just in case
    Stumble slightly, knock over a vase
    Stand in front of a mirror. the demons I will soon face
    Noose tight, pulls taken, leaving an awful taste
    Close my eyes, take the small leap
    Everyone will know of my defeat."
    these are my favorite lines....
    your writing here reminds me so much of a my other poetry, the stuff i don't really post. I can really relate to the emotions here...
    "Watch me run away with the pain
    I have nothing at all to gain
    Watch me slowly lose my self control
    My life starting to unfold"
    these lines are great, i really love them, their just so easily relatable and something i have written in different terms so often.
    your poetry is wonderful, you have an incredible talent.

  • 9 years ago

    by jLegendc

    WOW! a suicide poem! oh my damn yo.. this is really good.. i really imagined it happening.. the way you wrote it makes vivid pictures of what's happening.. this is my favorite! GREAT POEM man!
    i'm so amazed! =]