Unknown Lost

Guess what...I almost cried!!! This is truly sad...Despair, sorrow, jelousy...I felt everything. Life is still wonderful...just keep your faith in God. Believe me..sooner, everything's gonna be fine!!! You are talented!!! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-

Minus some spelling errors, I think you have quite a lot of control of how you know what to write and what you want to say

Somehow I don't feel alone anymore. I think Its fine the way it is. Won't change a thing.

"Find some rope, make a noose
Remeber not to make it loose
Take a bottle of pills just in case
Stumble slightly, knock over a vase
Stand in front of a mirror. the demons I will soon face
Noose tight, pulls taken, leaving an awful taste
Close my eyes, take the small leap
Everyone will know of my defeat."
these are my favorite lines....
your writing here reminds me so much of a my other poetry, the stuff i don't really post. I can really relate to the emotions here...
"Watch me run away with the pain
I have nothing at all to gain
Watch me slowly lose my self control
My life starting to unfold"
these lines are great, i really love them, their just so easily relatable and something i have written in different terms so often.
your poetry is wonderful, you have an incredible talent.

WOW! a suicide poem! oh my damn yo.. this is really good.. i really imagined it happening.. the way you wrote it makes vivid pictures of what's happening.. this is my favorite! GREAT POEM man!
i'm so amazed! =]