Man rhea, that was deep. I have tears in my eyes. sigh. remindse me of someone...

I think it's fine, but I have to say that the first two stanzas were a bit...chunky shall I say lol but it has true meaning. :) hard to get through the first 3 lines of the second stanza, but overall I find it very enjoyable and kudos!! ^_^

Great write.. keep them coming

This poem is so emotional, you wrote it on a fantastic way, it is deep, personal and truly touching. You should be proud on your self because this is very hard topic to write on, the message of this piece is so powerful and meaningful and you pointed it superbly.
Well done!

This is a very personal poem, great wording and full of emotion. You did a good job!

Best wishes

5/5 Ingrid

You worded this so well, i love the flow and everything about this one! a truely great poem that almost everyone could relate to! i almost had tears in my eyes readin this one! you did a great job on it! 5/5 keep it up
xx love

I luv the way you worded this poem and expression your emotion. it was well written. great work :)

5/5

Wow there is only one word for it deep

So sad... and its sweet that u dedicated it to sumone.. i love it cause it tells it like it is.. they never really are gone..

5/5

love willow ox

Luv it,agree,and its so sad,5/5

I like this one riminds me of my lost lover.........oh well i have a gf lol we gone out 4 3moths!!!! still going strong lol

It was sad but it wasn't depressing and it was sort of a lighter touch than im used too, so it was refreshing. 4/5 for the structure tho