Nice one indeed

Not bad

Oh how I loved this...this is amazing..I don't even know what I could say that would begin to sum up how I feel about this piece...

I was going to paste my favourite part, but then realized I would be pasting the entire poem.

I found this to be very intense and powerful throughout, flow is flawless throughout, coupled with such great imagery and an oringial concept, every aspect of this comes together to create a truly beautiful read.