Wow, what a great poem.... This would have to be one of the best that I have ever read, I have tears streaming from my face and a feeling of deep pain for you....

Well done babe... well done!...

Thankyou for writing it and sharig it with us...

Kind regards

Dee x x x

Excellent, Excellent and more of your excellence....
Dee :)

I cannot expressed how thoroughly I was .... I don't really know the word, but I was completely filled with the different emotions in this poem. The origin of this poem actually sounds like a song... Did it come from a song at one time? And if it didn't, have you ever thought about making it into one? I'm not saying you should, but I think it would be beautiful as a song, and it already is beautiful as a poem. All in all... GOOD WORK! Keep it up okay? It's really good! 5/5!