A Picture Perfect !

by chavii   Oct 5, 2007


Lush green blanket giving warmth to the bare lands.
Giant high mountains of rock built, exhibiting there power and strength.
Calm crystal lakes, shimmering with gold by generous sun rays.
And beautiful vibrant flowers, seducing minds of the passing gentlemen.
A picture perfect painting called 'nature' created by known yet unknown mysterious hands.

--chavii--

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  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    Hey darling,
    This is an amazingly beautiful piece. i love how you can make the most simplest yet most complicated things to understand so beautiful. My favorite part of the whole poem is "known yet unknown hands." it just speaks to me for some reason. I love it. thank you for the comment on mine. Sorry it's taken so long. i've had alot going on. but thanks again sweetie.....
    ~*~Amber~*~

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Oh this is perfect, i need to do another poem like this. but it would never be as good as this.....

    5/5 david

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey There!!

    It was really a very nice feeling to hv comments from old good friends, felt so comfortable being back after so long...thank you so much.

    "Lush green blanket giving warmth to the bare lands" starting itself has been so soul capturing..what to talk abt the way it continued.

    beautiful poem...so very powerful
    your poems regarding the beauty of nature has always been very inspiring...simply outstanding

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good to see something different. Expressions of the words are very good. Nice imagination... a tranquil feeling... it's really touching. Well done Chavii!

  • 16 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Chavii,it was a delight to read this beautiful imagery of nature by you.Keep going my friend.