Comments : Love at First Sight

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    Sweet 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by terry

    Sweet poem

  • 16 years ago

    by iluvbradley

    I love your rhyme scheeme. Everything went so well together. It is cute to=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nula

    Sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by chind

    Lols.
    this is cute
    everything ryhmed
    though in some parts you kinda forced it in
    and the beginnging,

    "One day at night"

    im just a little confused.
    how can it be day, but at the same time night ?
    lols

    over all it was nice.

    i give you 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Dear cindy lala. . My lady, in this poem, shone when appeared at night to light my whole world :)

    Thnx 2u all 4ur nice comments :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Beautifully written love poem, interesting rhyme=) loved it...5/5...Melody...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    U got a good talent! This is poem is so sweetttt!

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This poem is loving and whimsical and full of magic. I enjoyed it very much , he was nicely written and is just a feel good poem
    thank you for sharing

  • 15 years ago

    by Nula

    Omg! This is so beautiful!

    I so Love it! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Wow!! this ones nice!

  • 15 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Aw that is sweet, yes more people in the world should believe in love at first sight :)
    I liked your rhyming scheme it was different and simple.
    Really nice.
    5/5 for sure :)

  • 15 years ago

    by JeSsIcA

    Great poem. i love it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    This is so beautiful.. really it is.
    wow.. rhyming is your thing isnt it? haha.
    this poem is gorgeous..
    keep writing.. its awesome :)

  • 15 years ago

    by jescelle

    Heey great poem!! i loved the imagry... like this...
    "I could move neither left nor right

    And life, at once, became loose and tight"

    ...that contrast is the EXACT feeling that happens when sparks fly!! awsome!! 5/5!

    • 2 years ago

      by Shokry Al Qubati

      Thank you all for your nice words, appreciate it :)

  • 14 years ago

    by lisa

    Hi,i love the rhyming scheme,i have been trying to write a poem like that
    Well done !!
    Thankyou for your comment
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Nomad Being

    I can visualize my love at first sight! ;)

  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    This is really really beautiful!
    WOW!

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is truly beautiful I LOVE IT, I LOVE THIS POEM, two thumbs up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Illusion

    This happen to be the best rythm poem I've ever read. Still fresh even if its half a decade old..

    • 10 years ago

      by Shokry Al Qubati

      I really appreciate it man, thank you very much :-)