Comments : I Can't Tolerate!

  • 9 years ago

    by Nula

    Beautiful poem i love it

  • 9 years ago

    by Han Nan

    I never really thought you could right a poem in that style. I love it though. it has the passion the and if you understand the poetic rhythm that i love the most.

  • 9 years ago

    by AmY

    I agree wit u, i wish we could stop the timee. 4 month left and im gonna graduate :(((( i always wanted to graduate, but now i dont lol
    great poem i love it 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by AmY

    I agree wit u, i wish we could stop the timee. 4 month left and im gonna graduate :(((( i always wanted to graduate, but now i dont lol
    great poem i love it 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    We work hard to move on , to progress and become independent and yet it's hard to leave behind the great friends you make along the way. I think this was a great way of saying what I just said..
    very very nice

  • 9 years ago

    by Yeka

    Awsome and beautiful poem (^_^) keep up the wonderful poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Wondering Soul

    This is another really great poem another 5/5 I hope to read more by you.

  • 8 years ago

    by Cara

    This poem fits what im feeling at the moment perfectly. As the year is coming to an end, i am a bit lost.. i dont want to grow up any more..when i was a little kid, all i ever wanted to do was grow up.. but now.. i want to go back to my early childhood years and relive them and never grow older..
    anyways, great poem.
    good rhyming again :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Heba

    IT'S really nice and interesting..It's really beautiful to show love to people who loved you and took care of you such as friends and teachers..very amazing..

    Well done.5\5..

  • 6 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Thnx :)