Before I Quit

by Shokry Al Qubati   Oct 6, 2007


You should Baby comprehend!

When I bend,

When my heart to you I send;

To you I lend,

Not to make you condescend,

But to attend;

To be with me where I wend

Before I Quit,

I wana append.

You are Baby my Godsend,

But you should also apprehend.

If you are a start,

I am the End.

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  • 14 years ago

    by fakesmile

    Wow! love it! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    What a sweet poem. i imagine it to be very difficult to get all or most lines to rhyme in the same rhying scheme.. so good work.
    i agree with Crystal, how romantic -
    If you are a start,

    I am the End.

    lovely.
    :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    Good rhyming! Keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    Wow ! perfect rhyme ! you've got a way with words ! keep it up :)!

  • 15 years ago

    by A. M.

    This poem is so good, with nice rhyming, almost every line has a -nd ending.. which I by the way think is difficult to write, so great job.. Keep writing.. I enjoyed reading it.

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