Great ideas! 5/5

Very intriguing. It's like a snapshot of a moment in time.. and you have divulged so little about these two people that I'm just dying to know more!

It seems you have the gift of mystery as well as rhyme . Very nice poem with a twist that I enjoyed

Ha ha thats great! Love it =)

Love it awsome poem (^_^) 5/5

You have a unique way in ur writtings, nice twists...

I hope that I will not be this kind of girl for you.... Just to let you know lol

Very unique I like the way you write so short and mysterious thankyou for all the comments on my poems.

Lovely poem, i'm sad you only have one sad poem!.. you should write some more! lol :)
Thank you for your comment on my work it's very much appreciated.

5/5

This is very good once again. Talented rhymer :)
i like that the poem was written simply, but the idea of the poem was not simple.. it had a twist. So awesome work.
i dont know if what i just said made sense.. so if you understood it, i congratulate you.. hehe.

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Wow,so touching and really beautiful...

Welldone.5\5...

I loved how it took you on a ride and i had to guess what was next...beautiful
keep writing