First Love

by Tom   Oct 7, 2007


The days are long
But the nights are longer
When you've had a sleep
You begin to feel stronger
That is untill
The dreams start to come
Of that one special person
That you truley adore
You don't know who she is
Can't make out her features
You try to say hello
Attempt to greet her
But she just turns away
I don't understand
The way she stands and spins
All over the ground
She owns the dream
And owns my soul
Her presence is warming
And it makes you feel whole
But she starts to move away
The message understood
That girl in your dream
You've just fallen in love.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Frozen hearT

    Its great..... bravo....:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very cool. I loved it!

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  • 16 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Awwwwww
    Simple and Sweet!
    It had a rhythm to it.
    Nice flow.
    I liked it.

    Keep Smiling =)