Wow.. And some people think they have it bad. So sad to hear this guy lost everything. I'm surprised they are keeping him alive. I bet its a real hell this guy is going though. Everyone should be thankful for what they have. We take for granted the things we have, and when its gone then we know how good we had it. I'm thankful everyday, and this poem truly shows how bad things can get. Hopefully this man will finally get his peace. 5/5 Excellent poem!! How kind of you to write for this helpless guy. If he could read this piece I bet he would agree with it :P

Awesomeeeeeeeee dude.e.. kya baat hai..lol.. u just wrote an amazing piece.. i srsly love it... sooo painful n sad but still soo beautifully expressd..

The ending was so haunting and this was pretty scary to read. I can't imagine life like that.........................................
I have to read it again!
It's AMAZING.
~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~

A superbly written poem, you have captured the pain and frustration of soldier very well.Impressive poem.

Chavii.

Wow...That was very moving. Keep writing.<3

An amazing. emotional poem. 5/5.

This is my aboslute favorite poem ever written by you. reading it once doesn't cut it. everytime i look at your profile, i have to find this poem and read it. theres a lot of power inside thats so deep it's hard to explain the feelings brought out by this one.

GREAT JOB!!!

.:Katelyn:.