The cry of the serpent

by cory   Oct 8, 2007


I try not to look
But i fail
The sun is setting
I feel my jail
I sent my faith
But its all returned
I watch in anguish
As I'm burned
The world is slowing
My clan is dead
I still hear their voices
Trapped in my head
I hear their cries of agony
They are crying
Trying to be free
But Their lives all have passed
Their voices are sealed
No shadows are cast
This is my hell
But no one can see
What my hell is doing to me

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  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Once again you blew me away i love this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Awww...cory! deep, i love it...your emotions are sooooo strong...the flow and the words are wonderful...awww...i love it. keep it up hun! *hug*

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Again nice write, you are so good with emotion, the flow was a little off in the end, but good job none the less, I really enjoyed it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Thats really great! It has a lot of emotion and power:) Keep up the great work:)

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Simple. but full of emotion.
    nice flow. :]] 5/5.

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