I like this... keep up the good writing.... tell ur mom to stop callin you

A reallly good poem!

I loved your this poem you know its very deep and unique poetry... i alwasy like these type of poetry. it was sad though. great work
plz carry on nice work 5/5

I loved your this poem you know its very deep and unique poetry... i alwasy like these type of poetry. it was sad though. great work
plz carry on nice work 5/5

Ah, well I've definitely felt this way before. You gave a clear message, well done, I enjoyed it.

Greta xx

Aaw this is such a sad. i know the feeling hide behind this piece. weldone 5/5

Really enjoyed this deep and intense write form you. The want for this desire was very well expressed. It's often the case that we desire what we cant have and i found this poem very easy to relate with. Great job on this piece!!

Great poem =)
sad tho and i can relate, i know how it feels to hide from the one you truly want for fear they dont want the same or want it so bad..

Well done and well portrayed!

Love
Jacs
xxxx