Comments : Abuse of Power

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    Damn! ^-^

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    Wow I loved it......at a point I felt like I was there but just couldn't see it comin...lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Wow cory...this is so beautiful. you have a wonderful talent specially since you've used your experences...5/5 hun...beautifully written...the flow was terrific along w/ the whole piece!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    The way you portray your message was flawless and wonderful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Wow, amazing turely. Perfect scene, imagery was amazing, just Brilliant.

    A perfect poem, I would say!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    So dark. amazing poem. well written. its short and thats what makes it great. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashlee

    Wow.. i feel like i was there, like.. i did it and one of the people dien at the same time.
    great job!
    i know its not yet but happy veterans day :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Perfection.* keep it up. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow this poem made me shuder i loved it

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Really enjoyed this, excellent word use. 5/5, Em x