NICE POEM

Aww that is sweet!! You wrote a poem with pink wheelchairs in it and hot grandpas, and it still rocked!!

Amazing :)

Nice wrk.. its reallly sweet..n cute..lool.. nice wrk done..

Good job there.. it was cute but still would hit you in the heart.. everyones got a bestfriend and im sure whoever reads this would make them think of theirs.. i know it made me think of my bestfriend.. this is so sweet.. thanks for writing this.. it makes me want to go out and hug my bestfriend right now! ^_^

~angel~

WOW. I think happier work is more your style, but that is only my opinion. It was really strong and full of emotion, It radiated. I think that was incredible and a great way to wish someone a happy birthday. Great work. one of the best ive ever read, Keep up the great work. 5/5

Indeed a great poem. The structure and flow were amazingly smooth. The rhymes were funny and creative, keep up the good work :) 5/5

Tell her happybirthday from me ;) this poem is the best happy bd present anyone can get :D really so sweat and perfectly written

That's really cute!!! lol it's so awesome that you have a friend like that!!

Pretty deep...for a cheerleader, yeah if u dont like my comments, dont "message me" just DELETE THEM!

Fantastic this is really a fantastic poem my whole friends already gone through it here in india......& u became celebrity i must say u should be my friend here we goooo.....
my friends all are of this age they all enjoyed it wen it was shown on notice board of schooool........bye tc

I really like your poem alot

Im 16 now!^_^
starting off.. i was already conditioned to give a 4, but as i continued reading, i started to feel its sincerity.. it was too personal and sweet, and finding out that it was for your bestfriend.. amazing! utterly amazing!
great write! 5/5!

Hello sis.
good poem.
i miss having my old best friend
i think she hates me now
it inspired me tho.
ilysm,
mac<3

[ur.lil.sis]