Cellphone & My Heart ( love poem )

by jLegendc   Oct 9, 2007


My cellphone vibrates,
My heart accelerates,
At this rate,
I won't be able to count my heart beats...

Inbox full of messages,
Heart full of blood,
Sometimes I see you,
But you turn out to be just a mirage,
Inside of me flows a lot of blood that's about to flood,
Even Moses can't separate it in two,
Coz of my love for you...

Corny messages I've filled you up,
Sorry to bother you, I just can't stop!

My heart is aching,
My cellphone is ringing,
At the same time they're expecting,
That you will be a part of my heart,
So that our journey we can start!

I am nothing but a slave,
To serve you that's why I was made,
Very honored of your acquaintance,
Thankful for giving me a chance,
I love you even if the words I've written didn't make any sense!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay.

    I was drawn to this poem because of the title, and I wasn't disappointed.

    I found this to be both original and unique in concept, and you portrayed your feelings very well.

    Flow was good throughout and the imagery you created painted very vivid pictures for me.

    The only suggestion I have for this, is not to write in shorthand, "Coz of my love for you...
    "

    In my opinion, it just lessens the meaning of the poem.

    Apart from that, I enjoyed this.

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