Your such a great poet, i love reading your poems, again this poem is full of emotion and makes me feel sorry for what is happening, great work
5/5

Wow. Again I love the word choice and the meaning and its a great poem! You are a very good poet

This one is different from the usual sad poems i've read before. it's inexplicable, i can't exactly define my view in this.. but i can feel the intense emotions in this, the pain, burden and hopelessness is all mixed up and are so intense... great job!!

I don't find words to compliment.
but that is just an awesome piece dear.
great work
5/5

god bless you

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OMG! okay first totally on my favs right now...Loved this poem...could relate immensely to it in my life right now. It just flowed so perfectly you had my full attention for every line.... your amazing expression captured my heart and mind...pure poetic genius...just simply loved it, 5/5 only since there is nothing higher!

The pocket fiend!

I suggest working on punctuation; using commas and semi-colans (sp?) and all that . The poem was great, really, but it makes it hard to read it right when it comes to lines like this one:
Instead I feel nothing I'm hollow I'm bare,
When it comes to have that in one line as a whole, it doesn't make sense without a ; or , here or there to know when there's a small pause between some words.
I thought your word choice here was great -- really conveying emotion -- that is, until it got to "vacuum cleaner." When you use such simple words, and then throw in "vacuum cleaner," it just threw me off.
Overall, I feel like this could use some slight editing -- a couple grammar wrongs here and there -- but overall, well done.

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This is powerful and thoughts through it are greatly expressed. I can relate to this piece. Your rhymes are great, but you repeated word "my" too many times which disturbed the flow in some places. All in all, this is good piece, it sounds sincere, like it's written straight from the heart which is really effective.
5/5

This was another amazing write, but not as good as the one i have read before it. The word my is repeated too much, it takes away from the flow, the word choice was great, very deep, the emotion was clear, but not as strong as it should have been, the flow was a little off but nothing major, try rereading the poem out loud a couple of days after you haven't read it. other than that excellent job 4/5

And yet another breath taking poem. I like the way you write your poems. They're full of emotion. You've got great talent. 5/5

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I can sence the feeling through this poem. i have never yet read a poem like this befor. very different i think. i enjoyed it very much. keep up the good work