Comments : Trapped

  • 10 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Depressing but so touchy. ur such poems just leave me feeling so helpless everytime, i wish i could be there to give u company.

    well, nicely writtend dear

    all the best and take care

  • 10 years ago

    by njabulo b

    That was a fantastic poem again Cindy, its so though but i like the most your third stanza and the way you expressed your poem- its fantastic

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Now this was filled with so much sadness, but what i liked also was the word choice of the title, it invited me to read this poem.

    i'm back and i love reading this, first one from you in a long time, and i have missed them....

    5/5 David

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    Sad but beautifully penned poem, so glad to see you writing again cindy :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Cindy,
    You have to fight to make the darkness go away! You are still so young! You are only halfway there!!!!
    Don't lose faith in life, sweetie!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Cindy, this was so sad, the emotion was so deep and i could see your pain, sweetie you have everything to live for, always remember what you have got that is worth it.
    Love always
    Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Cindy...so beautifully sad....well written and moving....Love, Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This poem makes me think a lot about myself. This is sad and so unique at the same time! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by MrsOwens

    I really like your poem it is a symbol of how i have been feeling for a long time!

  • 10 years ago

    by Learning2Breathe

    Fantastic poem...keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I love it<3

  • 10 years ago

    by salma

    Very good writing :)
    u r so natural
    ur souky

  • 10 years ago

    by Elapsed

    An emotionally strong write, heartfelt sorrow in every line. An amazing poem yet very sad. Stay strong my friend.

  • 10 years ago

    by Varus

    What a poem! You are a magnificent poet! The way the feelings are conveyed makes us empathize with the person. Great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Really like this poem :D

  • 10 years ago

    by NotCryingForHelp

    I'm adding this poem to my favorites!

  • 10 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow great choice of words sweetie i really enjoyed it you did a great job with the flow and description 5/5 <33

  • 10 years ago

    by ♥shyann♥

    Very beautiful and sad felt write. you did an amazing job describing all your emotions and i look forward to reading more!! 5/5)
    Most favourite part:
    "Sadness has become me
    Happiness is all pretend
    Depression all around
    Darkness has become my friend"

  • 10 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Its a good poem
    I really like it.
    your a wonderful poet.

  • 10 years ago

    by Groovy

    You are amazing.
    best poem ive heard in a long time.
    very good.