Comments : Trapped

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "Sadness has become me
    Happiness is all pretend
    Depression all around
    Darkness has become my friend"

    Unfortunately, this is exactly how i've been feeling lately so my thoughts are with you Cindy because feeling like this isn't nice..
    Stay strong
    5.5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by shannon

    Cin this poem is sad..brought tears to my eyes....i love readin your poems ...im tryin to write more..tryin to find the time for it..well i love u cin SO MUCH!

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Very sad and touching...

  • 16 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Wow, that is well written. very sad though.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    A very sad poem but a great write.. keep strong mate :)

  • 16 years ago

    by claire

    Wow thats really enspiring and touching amazing and awsome hi-5

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    You are a wonderful and kind person who has so many friends here. You've got a lot of strength. Great expressions as usual.
    Take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    Beautifully sad Cindy.

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Sadness has become me
    Happiness is all pretend

    I love the way that these 2 lines sum it all up, for me. You are an amazing wordsmith, and this poem shows what talent you have. Beautifully insightful.. Well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Wow... beautiful poemm.. the wrds here r soo deep .. sumtimes i feel the same way.. evry line is frm heart n tht cn be felt.. gr8 wrrkkkk

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Another great piece cindy full of complete emotion, well done girl *hugs* xox sam

  • 16 years ago

    by ESE CREEPER

    I like this poem i putted on my favorets
    your really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Really pretty i absolutley adored it. you are a really fantastic writer, so sorry to see about that disease what does it do anyways,

    love your poems, so i was wondering if you could give me some feedback on some of mine, it would be greatly appreciated

  • 16 years ago

    by Marylou L

    Wow. this poem is so good! i like it a lot. i know what your feeling in this poem...its happened 2 me 2

  • 10 years ago

    by james packer

    I liked it I have depression too, can you please have a look at mine(it is called riley palmer it is a love poem, thanks.