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  • Good job....hope you can work things out

  • 16 years ago

    by shawn

    Yeah, that first stanza basicly deffines me as well lol. I love your poems and especaily the repetitive a,b,c,b rhyming you use, it makes each stanza flow wonderfly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by XdangerouslyXgenuineX

    Did you purposley not title this or is that because you cant think of a title?
    maybe you could these:
    praying to push forward
    barely getting by
    left with the scars of carelessness

    i personally like the last one,anyway mina this is a great poem!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Aww, i loved this one! beautifully written! 5/5