He told her

by Kasey   Oct 12, 2007


He told her to straighten up her life and that it was over.

She felt like she had no reason to try
She just wanted to roll over and die
But all she could do was cry.

She went back to lock up in hopes of her life becoming better
she told him her hopes and dreams in a 5 page letter
when she got out all she think about was if her and nick would be back together

but when she saw him all they did was fight
he told her to leave him alone and stay out of his life
she pleaded and cried and told him she was sorry for everything she did
he said i dont care kasey you shouldn't have done what u did

so he walked away
she never got to finish what she had to say
but she realized thats how everything had to stay
it broke her heart for things to end this way
A TRUE STORY

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  • 16 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    Eww men are sooo DUMB!!!! ARGHHH
    well not all, but yeah I SOO UNDERSTAND!!! its so uncivil!!! WHY DO PEOPLE DO THAT!?!?!? freaks!!!!
    I really liked it ^_^ aww sad though
    =/ happens!?!?

    =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Thank u 4 a short n sweet comment. I would be lying if I say that I liked your comment. About your poem, its a very nice poem but the thoughts are not exactly coming to you. Grammatical mistakes can be avoided. Use punctuations. But a very very nice work. Keep improving. Well done. Bye.

  • 16 years ago

    by Airika

    Good one//i have alot of poems about lost reltionship....cuz the same thing just happened to me..but good job=]

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Awl! this is totally cute! its sad and just whicked cute! good work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    I think each line drags on a little, but otherwise- it's good
    keep writing

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