A TRUE STORY

by Kasey   Oct 12, 2007


THIS IS AN ACTUAL EVENT

Heres the story of a boy and girl whos love was so pure
she was in love with him and he felt the same for her.

they were never apart and thats how problems started to occur.

she knew he had court and couldnt deal with him going away.

everytime she was mad they started to fight
until shit got worse one dreadful night

she hit him as hard as she could
all he could was stop and stare at her and said he loved her and always would

so u wanna know how their love comes to an end?
lets just say they can never be friends

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  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony

    Oh wow.. this is really good.. i lik it becuz it truly.. well.. i mean.. i can sit here and tell ya but i would prolly be repeatin everythin sum1 else said. so.. i lik it.. keep writing=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Aah... this one hurts me. Nice work. Improvement needed. But keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    I can sense that you are putting alot into your writing, my only critique, is for a little more substance, maybe take your time a little more, theres nothing wrong with the piece it is well written, i was just left wanting more...

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