Aww another amazing write! Very amazing imagery and your emotions were so clearly portraited.
Flawless, 5/5

Great poem, i just loved reading the innocence line here. It just really showed your point of view which was kinda interesting to see. Sometimes the world can be so hard and because of your profession you are the one who knows that beter then anyone else I guess.
The flow is good and because of the great usage of words it's a great poem to read.
I personally loved it.

5/5

xo Angelique

A sad though amazing write. 5/5.

Beautiful rhythm.
perfect!
absolutly perfect!
luv it<33

Thats cool and thanks for your service country pumkin.

The message in this poem really hit me deep inside. I can imagine you would want to have your innocence back, awwwwwwwwwww!!
You made a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Amazing poem! another great one! :) deserve a higher score than 5!

This poem really touched me....your write is amazing in every way! Not only can i see through your eyes a side of being in iraq i can feel wat you felt(well in a since). THis is so great--I cant wait to read more. Amazing!

PS- Thanks for your pride and dedication to serve for the country!

Woow that is really deep... i love it and i love your work.

I loved it!!! =p

Wow i love this poem you are such an amazing poet