Okay. i get this has a deep underlying and serious issue behind the words but...I couldn't help laughing at some points. particularly"Had to dodge a flying shoe" hahaha. that cracks me up. anyway. i loved the concept behind this. great flow and content, amazing imagery and while i found it humoress at times, you both did a wonderful job at looking at the serious side of this. it really made me think. congratulations to you both!!

Excellent job! This has to be my fave from you by far! It was filled with all kinds of emotions and they were easy to relate too. I loved the ending because it spoke of such truth. Well done you have just made me favorites *5/5*