Some wierd qiuck peom

by DannieDemon   Oct 14, 2007


I'm cutting myself into peices over you
becasue i can't stand the things you do
and i'm losing sleep over all the pain
i'm standing here silent feeling the rain
of your tears that fall down from hevaen
i liked it better then anytime when
i could recall anything i wanted to say
any time you made me have my blood and pay

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  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Actually quite good, but its a shame that you dont have a title, or a proper one. I think you should. And put in proper punctuation make it more presentable. But good choice of words, excellently written. 5/5

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