I'm already Gone

Wow, this was just great. I don't really write poems like this, but this poem was absolutely amazing. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

Usually, I don't like poems that mention self harm/suicide etc, as I find them cliche.

However, I loved this one.

So much raw pain, emotion and depth.
I was hooked from the first stanza and from there on it just kept getting better and better.

Coupled with a stunning ending, this is a beautiful piece...filled with such melancholy and heartbreaking to read, yes. But a beautiful piece of writing nontheless.

Hi. :/

I know we haven't talked lately because of our little "falling out"... if you could call it that. But I just wanted to let you know that the poem was amazing and that if you need me, I'm here. [No matter what you say, I AM here.]

-- Steph

WOW!!! I love this poem, it seems you take things from your own life. It was real good.....i use my life for poems too...but idk if you really have tried to kill yourself or not but its really not worth it. Trust me i almost killed myself, i cut myself with a single edge razor blade and spent a week in a half in the hospital....and it was all becuz of a guy and stupid jealous girls talking behind my back....its really not worth it.

Good!

This one, This piece is quite similar to the other poem that Ive just commented, But on the behalf of it, I can see that the flow is force, but I can see much effort on it!

Keep it up!