Broken Heart (Epitaph)

Wow I love it!

Here lies my broken heart,
Torn, bruised, and ripped apart.
May it rest, finally be at peace
Once it loved now it's deceased
Left here lonely for an eternity,
Forever heartless I will now be.

^
I know this feeling hun!
My heart lies torn apart, hurt and used. Your heart as finally loved and now it has died from the pain of love.

Loved how you ended it by

"Left here lonely for an eternity,
Forever heartless I will now be."

Your heart is now forever lonely
Let it rest forever heartless you will be:/

Wow such a powerful poem
That had a great flow
And the rhyming was great(:

5/5 great poem

Great piece. Rhymes flowed really well.