Wow, quite impressing piece, it has fantastic topic and you created truly excellent atmosphere in it. Rhythm is really beautiful in whole poem and it has great message. Good imagery is mixed with superbly described emotions, really deep. Rhyming is also totally unique and refreshing. Well done! I really can't chose favorite stanza, I like them all.
Oh my good word. I`m speechless. This has got to be my favorite from you. Everything about this is just perfect. The imagery, the wording, the story line, the mood, the symbols, metaphors and similes lol...my goodness. This poem is AMAZING.
This is so imaginative and descriptive Gem, such beautiful imagery! I can just picture this beautiful place with all this magic happening! Hope you don't mind if I print this out and read it to my kids tonight at bed time... It will probably take at least 10 minutes to get through with all there excited interruptions... 5/5
Wow, this really impress me... So beautiful and descriptive. The imagery that you created is great and so vivid. I like this piece from the beginning to the end, it is very original and creative.
Your choice of words in it is absolutely fantastic.
You have true talent!
5/5 from me
Oh holy crap.
This is frigging awesome.
I don't even know what to say...
Gem, this poem is amazing.
The content, the concept, imagery wording and flow..they all come together to create a truly beautiful read.
Your flow is flawless throughout the entire piece, while the opening stanza was beautifully done, it pulls the reader right in and from there it just gets even better.
There isn't a thing I would change about this.
Amazing job with this.