Comments : Forget About Love (Shadow Sonnet)

  • 16 years ago

    by Perfection

    Cool style and a cool poem... you are very creative...
    The rhyming and concistency are flawless..

    Great job =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This was definitely flawless, but ouch! A lot of powerful and angry feelings here, but it carefully done and well placed! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bryan
    Congrats on #100 :) Another style you have conquered. Excellent job!
    Take care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved it! I can easily relate to this poem, because I'm going through something similar myself. I thought your poems detail was good and I loved the style nice work.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh,, what a poem.... i think i have to congratulate u coz honestly u really impressed me and i think not even me also some readers out there! u have a great talent to show so, just keep on writing wish u all the best coz u always done a very great job.. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    like always
    what a wonderful one to be your 100th also
    it looks like it would have been hard
    but anything easy isnt worth working for eh
    good job again
    great topic also

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Great job..for one form poetry is sooo hard so i give you props for that..but the flow was great and so was the emotion you put into it. It was definitely felt. Keep up the great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Wow Bryan you're really gifted in writing Sonnets. I really love reading your sonnets. I hope to read more beautiful poems from you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Excellent write, with such restrictions. I loved the way you wrote this. Your choice of words was good. I really liked the way it flowed, that is hard to do sometimes in formed poetry. Great Job!!!

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by darah

    I just loved this!
    Go on like this!

    Greetz,Darah

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is a fine piece of poetry! I really loved reading every line. I will definately read more of your poems in the future.

    Best wishes,

    5/5 Ingrid