ONE WISH

by Gamaliel munoz   Oct 16, 2007


If i had a wish
I would be you,
Your lips
Just to know what makes you smile,
Your tears
To be there when you frown,
Your eyes
To memorize your past,
Your brain
To see if you think of me every day,
Your love
To see who or what brakes your heart,
Your strength
To be the one you could count on,
But most important
Your heart
To be the reason your alive.

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  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Great poem but one line i didnt really understand is,

    "your striaght
    To be the one you count on"

    care to explain what that means ??

  • 16 years ago

    by Kevin

    Amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    I thought this started off really well, you have all the emotions there and the flow is easy to follow

    "To see who or what brakes your heart,"

    ^ 'breaks' your heart

    "Your straight
    To be the one you could count on,"

    ^ I didn't get this line, straight what?

    "But most important
    Your heart
    To be the reason your alive."

    ^ But that last line was gorge and really set off the poem perfectly.
    You have the makings of a great one here, well done

    *Gem*

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