Nice piece,

Hell have a fury like a woman scorn!!!

full of emotion and straight to the point.

well done

Gary

Omg i loved ur poem. i know exactly how that feels. i could relate to it so much. it wuz really good. awesome job :-D

Wowww...That was really awesome...I loved it so much and I think that the flow was nice and the choice of words was so good..
Keep up the good work..