Comments : Lament of my Soul

  • 16 years ago

    by CODACHROME

    This is a really great poem I can certainly see the emotion hidden beneath the words 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Can offer the help
    I sorely need now.
    I need some advice
    A why and a how."

    These lines hit me the most! The poem overall spoke with a special message and plenty of power behind it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    And yet again, you have amazed me.. you are soo good!!! i love how you write, it flows and fits so perfectly! keep up the freaking awesome work! :o]