Comments : Something.

  • 16 years ago

    by Zima Ultifera

    Birgit!
    Although this was not your best ever, I tend to love everything you write :O

    You keep amazing me with every words you get down on paper!

    ^^
    (L)

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I really like the opening line of this poem - it's really strong. Just like you said in the beginning(sp) it came from your heart, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by cass

    Gr8 poem very deep.....nice! !!! ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    For somethin that you just came up with in a short time, it is really good. the flow and wording were really good. 5/5

    Kalee