I liked it. It was sad, but I could relate and I really liked the way you described everything in the poem.

So sad, this poem touched me in so many ways... I can relate to some parts of it, and it sounds so honest, filled with emotions.
You also created great imagery to follow all feelings in this greatly written piece.
My favorite stanza is:

-So don`t let me drag you down
when my heart will not let me tell
of how much I need you around
to pick up pieces of my fragile shell-

Keep up!

What a beautiful write. i found this to be both intense and gripping. the emotion and depth you put into this piece was wonderfully done, as was the imagery. beautiful...Filled with such melancholy and heartache, yes. but beautifully written non the less.

A wink and a smile should suffice
looking at you with poker straight eyes

of a haunted soul wearing a clown`s mask

I really, really love those parts, like the whole poem actually, you express yourself very well and your words are well chosen.
You obviously have the talent to become a great poet (if you aren't already)
5/5 (can't give a 6 :( )

That is quite amazing.

Your words cut through a layer of my soul i didnt know exsisted
the way you write is most becoming
consisting of morbid thoughts that bring tears to an eye
your words are amazing

I truely loved this piece, so beautiful and touching. You expressed yourself into such great depth and it took my breath away. You have great talent and honestly should never stop writing because you make the readers feel great emotions over them with each piece you write. Well done. ~Mel

Luvvvvvvv it its so me i want 2 tell my friends everything but dont want them 2 worry and cant bring myself to tell them, so added 2 my favourite list

5/5

This poem is so deep and emotional, you put your self in it and you was totally honest. This piece is easy to relate with it and and you expressed feelings on truly fantastic way. I like every line, it truly deserves 5/5

Like woah..that was amazing....
feels like you put a lot of emotion into that.
great job.

check out some of my poems?

I won't praise you. Yeah it's good, and it's full of emotions. But you can still be better. Believe me.

This poem is incredibly moving, great job!
keep writing
take care
*-Sarah-*
x.o.x

Great one. A must read. Definitely 5/5!!!

I really don't like clowns just to inform you =] But I did like this piece alot. It was written in such great depth which portrayed emotions of sadness and your tears within my heart. Really wrenching and delicate. Expressed well Tim 5/5 from me. ~Mel

To show my love would be a daunting task
it is hidden here under the guise

Some find it hard to show their love & they
fear maybe it will turn out wrong perhaps...

of a haunted soul wearing a clown`s mask
with many tears fallen under his eyes

This is so sad..one who makes the world
smile yet in his heart there are tears..
a touching write.