Ohhh teacup this is beautiful!! despite being relatively short i found this to hold so much depth and emotion, while the imagery you portrayed created very vivid pictures. this left me with such a contented feeling. beautifully written!
Truely a beautiful piece. You wrote this with so much elegance. Imagery was gorgeous. From such a simple title which I must say was unique you wrote a poem which captured my heart. Well done with this piece of work. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. ~Mel
AAAWWWWW that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!! HAHAHAHA I love this piece woman! My most favorite thing about watching kids is seeing them in that concentration when they go to licking their lips HAHAHAHA THAT IS SO CUTE!!! BEAUTIFUL MEMORY!
Willow my dear this poem is simply beautiful and very touching. It reminds me of many homeade ordiments that I have made over the years for my Christmas tree. You captured the mother's love so deeply in this poem. I loved it, it really got me into the spirit of Christmas.