Comments : Straw Angel

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohhh teacup this is beautiful!! despite being relatively short i found this to hold so much depth and emotion, while the imagery you portrayed created very vivid pictures. this left me with such a contented feeling. beautifully written!

  • 10 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very amazingly written
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Truely a beautiful piece. You wrote this with so much elegance. Imagery was gorgeous. From such a simple title which I must say was unique you wrote a poem which captured my heart. Well done with this piece of work. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. ~Mel

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, Willow, this is so touching, truly beautiful. I love your description in whole piece, they brought a smile to my face.
    Whole poem is greatly written.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is amazing because evrything flowed here! The imagery, the organization I mean wow!

  • 10 years ago

    by Natalie84

    AAAWWWWW that made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside!! HAHAHAHA I love this piece woman! My most favorite thing about watching kids is seeing them in that concentration when they go to licking their lips HAHAHAHA THAT IS SO CUTE!!! BEAUTIFUL MEMORY!

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, this is truly touching, every line is amazing and emotional. You wrote it with such beauty... I am impressed, you should be proud on your self. You put a smile on my face...

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congratulations on the spotlight!

  • 10 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Great job, congrats on the win, poem was very full of emotion, loved it

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on the weekly win:)

  • 10 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on the weekly win:)

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenna Rose Kat

    Aww thats cute. It was a pleasure reading.
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    This poem is so cute. I loved it. 5/5 Keep up the amazing work :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    Aww thats such a sweet piece, which creats a lovely picture in my mind of sweet lil children, great piece, xox sam

  • 10 years ago

    by Trampled Angel

    Willow my dear this poem is simply beautiful and very touching. It reminds me of many homeade ordiments that I have made over the years for my Christmas tree. You captured the mother's love so deeply in this poem. I loved it, it really got me into the spirit of Christmas.

  • 9 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Sweet!! =D

  • 9 years ago

    by kati

    This is so beautiful,sweet,and cute!! =D

  • 9 years ago

    by Milo

    Beautiful and simple-I love it.

  • 9 years ago

    by peaunt

    Very cute poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Short and sweet, I kinda liked it