Harder To Breathe

by Timothy r   Oct 19, 2007


Her hair drapes across her eyes
Accentuated by sky light azure
Remnants of mythical surprise
Described in fairytale folklore
Experienced from a different view
Recondite spirits held inside

To behold such a reflective light
Opens the heart to soaring flight

Behind her facade lies the seed
Radiating from smiles implied
Eternal hope of future embrace
Attempting to solve love`s greed
Trying to breathe without reply
Held within a heart to burst
Exhaled with a forceful sigh

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... this is so beautiful, filled with emotions and greatly written acrostic. Every stanza is so touching. I like your descriptions in the whole piece, they have such vividness.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow... You wrote this amazingly, I honestly enjoyed in every line. It is so powerful and your choice of words is excellent. I love rhythm of it, it is truly deep and emotional. Atmosphere that you created here is unique and impressing. Well done!

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