Flirtatious Moments & A Rumour That Breaks Hearts

by Tammie   Oct 20, 2007


You were always more of a priority then I was to myself,
Ever-changing, cheating at the game and still losing.
Six feet under was always my safest bet when it came to you,
Watching my disappointed face you always found so amusing.

Frankly, I've had enough of you to last me a lifetime.
Dwelling on bad choices and a loss of my self esteem
Isn't going to get me anywhere. That's all I ever got from you;
A lesson learnt and never forgotten, a simple daydream.

Gone are the times of fulfilled promises and words of truth,
Leaving behind lost lovers at your nearest train station.
Coffee stained rings on the back of your television guide
Are the only things that have no end in a hopeful situation.

Trusting your guarantee that you aren't the same as the rest,
Sure enough, my sorry eyes didn't see the italic fine print
'One year only', I know false advertising is common these days,
But what can you blame it on? Certainly not a catalogue misprint.

Excuses, excuses, blame it on something worthwhile for once.
What did you get out of this meaningless affair anyway?
Flirtatious moments and a rumour that breaks hearts?
But why should I care, right? Finally I'm walking away.

** I'm not good with titles, and this one was a last resort. If you can think of a better one, please let me know. :] **

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  • 15 years ago

    by rdn 11 2 08

    5/5 LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! it's real and u did a nice job writing it. keep the title cuz it makes ur readers wanna read more of ur poems simply cuz the title really has nothing to do with the poem, so they wanna read all of them 2 c wat ur really going through.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    First off, I just loved the title. It was totally unique and captured my attention.

    I just loved this poem ... the style in which you wrote was interesting and kept me hooked from beginning to end. The long lines flowed flawlessly and the message you expressed with clear in your last line .. beautiful.

    When I read the first sentence I knew I was gonna like this piece because it was unique and wonderful.

    "cheating at the game and still losing."
    "A lesson learnt and never forgotten, a simple daydream."
    "Coffee stained rings on the back of your television guide"
    "Certainly not a catalogue misprint."
    ^this lines really caught my eye and made the poem perfect for me.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was simply amazing. One of the best poems of yours I have ever read. It was so deep and interesting! I love the title don't change it! This is definitly what I needed to read today something breathe taking. 5/5 ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Very good very good, i absolutley adored it,
    about the title i think you should call it walking away, but thats just the opinion of a little 13 year old kid lol great keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    OH, OH OH! I love this poem! :D

    Leave the title. Leave everything. This is just... kdfsjg. THE BEST THING I HAVE READ FROM YOU.

    Oh man. I'm excited. Hahah. I can't even say anything or type. fdjgsf

    FIVE! 5! UNO x FIVE!

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