Comments : I am

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha

    I love it! I feel that way sometimes too!

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    This poem was really good. I felt like you should be "spittin" it live on stage at def poetry jam or something. It was powerful yet simple. My favorite part was "In shadow I blend, in light I am visible..." Those lines conjure an image that allows me to actually feel like I am seeing the blending of the shadow and the light.

    Nicely done:)