I love him

by AlyssaBrook   Oct 20, 2007


Tears were falling from my eyes,
Like rain departing the skies
I thought I was alone until he came,
a Knight, an Angel, they're both the same
I knew I loved him from the start,
that unmistakable feeling, from the heart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Hi...
    well written poem but I think it's too short... you could have added at least one more stanza to it...

  • 16 years ago

    by Gee McC

    I really enjoyed this poem, short and too the point, great job at showing your emotions, sorry to hear that you have recently split up =[
    Hope it's all ok

  • 16 years ago

    by AlyssaBrook

    Thanks!
    It's actually quite old ... most of my poems are. (I have just recently come over a Writer's Block). But what tears my heart in two, is that our relationship ended shortly there after.
    :P

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    That's an absolutely beautiful poem of love. Very short but it reflects all your feelings. Great job.

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