DYING SOUL!

by Fay   Oct 20, 2007


Dark circles, bleeding eyes and pale skin,
That is the reflection she sees within.
Losing track of time and date,
Her heart has filled with so much anguish and hate.

Mute! no expression nor a single word,
She sees no point, as she's never heard.
Exhausted and miserable as she slowly numbs,
"Your never going to be good enough", she hums.

Trapped in her own mind's thoughts and feelings,
Too many wounds that still haven't found healings.
Searching for a reason to why she's still here!
So far, yet so very near.

Killing herself slowly and skipping a heartbeat,
Her constant pain she's unable to defeat.
Given-up and lost all her hope,
She's a dying soul that can no longer cope.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nariman

    I absoloutly loved it!
    Woaw, you've got such a perfect way to express how u feel, i just love how u wrote this poem..
    Can't wait to read more!
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by SheFlowsThroughMyVeinsLikePosion

    Thanxs for the comment, your right i like your stuff. this is really good. well done 5/5
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Krissymkitty

    Wow...see i love this guy and he knew it...as my mom would say i feel for him hard...i was at this dance working in the kitchen and decided to go find him just so i could at least see him that night...well, when i found him he was dancing with someone...that night i wrote a poem called Pain and i it helped but when i saw him it felt like my soul was gone, like it left me, ever since i haven't been the same...everytime i see him it feels like the "knife" that stabbed me that night just goes in deeper and deeper...so i can relate to this poem and i do feel like that..5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    I Have Been In That Position Before So I Can Defintly Relate,, I Love The Wording You Used And The Flow Of This Is Unbelievable,, Good Job And Thank You Soo Much 4 YOur Comment It Meant Alot
    perfectlyBROKEN xx

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