The Man You're Looking For

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 22, 2007


Title : The Man You're Looking For
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Are you looking for a man who'd understand you?
When you're down he's always there right beside you
The one who will always care with anything you do
When you're wrong, he's the one who told you what's true

Are you looking for a man who'd give you warmth?
When you're in danger, he'll protect you from harm
You're down on your luck and he'll be your lucky charm
When you're cold, he's the one who offer you his arm

Are you looking for a man who'd offer you a tissue?
When you're crying and the tears are all over you
When you're hurt, he's the one who could feel it too
The one who could be your place to run onto

Are you looking for a man who'd show you the way?
Who'd give you the light when your clouds are gray
Every time you need him, he'll always there to stay
And be the one who will care everything that you say

Are you looking for a man who'd give you his best?
The one who will care when it's time to have a rest
Always try to fix everything you put in a mess
Even when it's bad, he won't ever love you less

Are you looking for a man who could be your star?
The one who really understand about who you are
Well girl, I don't think you should go very far
The man you're looking for is in front of your heart

2007 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

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  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Are you looking for a man who'd understand you?
    When you're down he's always there right beside you

    can I make a suggestion? I think you should take one of the you's out and switch it with another word. otherwise I really enjoyed reading this one, guys that can write are hard to come by, but guys that can write well are another thing. keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    OH MY .. that was just amazing!! By far, the best poem I have read from you and one of the top poems I have read on this site. It was so easy for me to relate with the type of man you were describing because it is what I, and I bet most girls, want. Well done, this poem is going in my faves. :]

  • Wow, this poem was really good. Kind of reminds me of a poem I read before, but this one is very beautiful. I really loved it. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ITS AMAZING and WONDERFUL reminds me of the superman i found

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Amazingly written my friend.
    pure and true.
    great job =)