Color Of Life

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 23, 2007


Title : Color Of Life
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Draw the line, in the piece of paper
Then add some colors, if it's proper
Paint your expression, just let it go
Let it out, so everybody will know

Brush it with yellow or maybe red
Or you can fix it with green instead
Black or white, it doesn't matter
Let's be playful, before it's over

Blank canvas, let's play color of you
With magenta, crimson or even blue
Anything like brown maybe looks good
They can be part of you, if you would

Life is full with love, let's play the pink
It may too bright, well just stop to think
Or maybe you need to change your color
Do what you want, before the dream is over

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was a very good poem. It showed how people have choices to make and how they should make them fast or else lose the previelage(sp) of choosing for themseles, the rhyming was a little forced at parts, and the flow was a littlte shoppy, but still a good, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Perfectly done! i love the last stanza it made me smile actually so i was enjoyed reading it keep it up!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by judith redmount

    Strange, but nice poem. So many options in life and all the options with all the consequences need to be considered before taking a decision. That's what I got from this. nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Very good and very creative. Awesomeness! <3

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Aww, this was really cute. I like how you mentioned a number of colours. It made the poem appear colourful itself.

    Well done.

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