Comments : In death's embrace (title contest)

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    This is crazy lol. i like this poem it has alot of detail and tells a story. wat inspired u to write it?

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    That was amazing, Natz.
    Great job on the flowing.
    The rhyme fit in perfectly.
    Love youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu.
    Shorteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

  • 16 years ago

    by Solus

    Excellent poem. Love the way you discribed it as a dance with death.