So pleased to see this eloquently poetic rant again....
I'm showing this to my friends..;-)..and
I shall be back
for more dessert...

Ohh this ones sorta spooky... it gave me a chill at the back

I love the surely at the end. Well, I love the whole thing, but that sort of colloquialism just smacked of rightness.

I just love how u ended this poem..
you always mix simplicity with deep wording
..which i have noticed while reading all ur featured poems.

a gd job
5/5