You told me

by BrittBaby aka wonderwoman   Oct 24, 2007


You told me you'd take me places...
Paris, Rome, mars,
you said we'd go...
you told me...

you told me you'd make me happy...
candy, kisses, flowers, cards
you said you'd give...
you told me...

you told me I'd be safe with you,
pain, tears, blood, bruises
you gave to me...
you told me...

you told me you'd love me...
Sara, Becky, Megan, Jill
you told them the same...
you told me...

you told me you'd;
take me places
make me happy
keep me safe
love me...
but what you really told me was...
LIES!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    Creative and interesting i love it

  • 14 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    Creative and interesting i love it

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Lies always hurt. im sorry ull make it thru.

  • 15 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Aw thanks so much for the comment, it was really sweet :)
    This is good, really emotional and I can deeefinitely relate, I think alot of people probably can. 5/5 :)

  • 15 years ago

    by SweetGrief

    WOW ! great beggining! and awesome ending!

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