I have to point out some things to you the title is amazing i love it followed by the first stanza really draws the reader in your a great writer and i love this poem keep writing...=) 5/5

Love your choice of words, objects describing everything!! great job!!

Wow really god love the words great poem

Wow! this was amazing! it was so deep. and i absolutely lovedd the title of this poem, very nice, very eye catching. job well done! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

I will be on your stoop to check your stuf out promptly.