All i can say is wow! 5/5

Wow, thats really good. i like it alot.
good write!

Okay, Myuh darling, I love it. It's austere and I just adore the concept -- "revolving doors." Such a brilliant metaphor for life and the way things go. Your use of "spinning" twice , I feel really gives emphasis on how life goes. For an odd reason, these lines stuck out at me:

Spinning quickly.
Emotions I fought.
Now, distraught.
`We fight love; we fight friends; we fight society and we fight ourselves -- but either way, we end up distressed sometime .

I just think it's nicely written.
Btw; I miss you, dearr' . We never talk anymore.

--..MiNDYY

Wow i really like this!
5/5