Suicidal:(

by sarah   Oct 25, 2007


I walk outside in the rain so people wont see me cry.I try and hold my feelings inside so no one notices.People tell me I'm phsyco but I ignore them.I'm tired of my family they don't understand.I wear black so I can express how I feel.I bleed cause no one seems like they care.Sometimes I wish I could just disappear,but nothing follows through.I'm giving up,giving up on everything.Every moment in time, goes to fast.disappear please be my great escape.
Right now I'm depressed,mostly on how guys don't think us girls are good for them.How they can just break us down.OH please I'm begging don't do this again.I'm sick and tired I want to go home.Runaway from everyone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Four Letter Lie

    I know how u feel. thats what its like for me. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by gack60

    Hey sarah, this was an interesting piece to read, if im honest (which i am otherwise why comment at all!) i thought it should have been broken up into stanza's instead of just one big paragragh,(although maybe thats just a personal thing, not sure), also i noticed quite a few spelling mistakes which really spoils a good poem.

    Its a really good attempt at expressing feelings thought thru depression i too have some knowledge of this subject so weel done for that.

    Only because of the errors and stuff i rated this a 3/5, but with some work could easy be a 5/5.

    Gary.

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